Why do you think the use of illegal drugs is spreading among young people?
Length:around 200 words
Choose 3 key words from below
6.Education in schools
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First, the internet should be blamed the most.
Thanks to it, it's gotten much easier for ordinary people to
Thanks to it, it's gotten much easier for ordinary people to illegal drugs.
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Now that it's such a era that every family has at least one pc , so even young people including children can get to illegal drugs without their parents' notice.
Next, Stress must be one of the biggest reasons. Like adults who have to survive the tough time in their companies, young people are also required to be competitive in their society, like schools. Hence, they are full with a lot of stress, which lead them to using drugs.
Lastly, we can't ignore the influence of celebrities. At the risk of sounding exaggerated, we can see the news of arrests of celebrities for the use of illegal drugs almost every week. This can mislead young people to think illegal drugs are not uncommon, not so special.
Needles to say, we can't get rid of these causes from our current lives. Therefore, to keep young people from using drugs, adults like parents and educators have to take the responsibilities as in educating them well.
You can use the word increment here, however that only implies movement, but you've not stated which way:
you can increment things either up or down. "we can clearly see the rising increment of"
However, a more native way of saying this would be: "we can clearly see the increase of illegal drug usage.”
Also, in this case, you only need to specify "drug", instead of drugs.
he uses a lot of illegal drugs.
he buys his drugs at the drug store.
There are many who abuse illegal drugs.
Drugs are illegal to use.
This town has a lot of illegal drug users.
This town has a lot of illegal drug use.
Illegal drug use has risen in our city.
We need to find a way to fight illegal drug use.
"we can clearly see the increase of illegal drug use." is more native than usage in this case also.